I don't know if you'll ever continue to post new updates, but I'm here to say your work is the one who inspired me to create my own VN, and I just published the DEMO, so thank you, a lot! XD
Is this game still working? And Wow you have Jackaloo help lul ~ Too bad i found out this game so late, and really wanna support you after read your credit.
God.. so long since I got to read the first build and I finally had time for the second and f#ck.. that was amazing, made me cry, obviously.. and laugh a lot too.. You just put a smile on my face through the whole build! Can't wait for the next one~
I love the story, can't wait to see more updates <33 also will other survivors be romanceable or it will be just our boi Cooper? Wanna know if Jason will be a option :P
Finally got around reading build 2 and... holy shit.
you're sense of humour is just "chef's kiss"
also wtf. did u just use incest for character building purposes? don't get me wrong i don't support incest, but i am interested to hear what the actual fuck happened to those 2 to think fricking your brother is a good thing.
This is my favorite update even if it's the only one. I love it when they played truth or dare, when they turned fighting the Epura into a gameshow, when Cooper and Lucas cuddled under the stars, and every moment of this update. I got a bunch of laughs, parts where I empathized with the characters, and overall really enjoyed this update. I love every single bit of this update and I can't wait for more of the story. I want to see how things will end up with Cooper and Lucas and the gang. I absolutely love this VN and I can't wait for future updates. Amazing job well done!
The game is... equal parts dark and humorous. It's like, it's incredibly good, I loved the characters very much, especially Don and Cooper. I also like the moral dilemma the MC went through with Dia, it was... with a lack of a better word, interesting. It was incredibly sorrowful, and I did feel myself almost shedding a tear because I am too sensitive for dark shit, but I still loved it-
That is so sweet!! Thank you so much!! I mean, I feel like a lot of dark narratives these days can be a little... overly serious sometimes. Not all, but some. So, I've tried to balance it out - give some nice, funny, even romantic moments as well as the dark and miserable ones. Though the happy moments will definitely be declining as the story progresses - it is the end of the world. (Also which moment did you almost shed a tear?)
Thank you for the comment though!! That's so flattering - calling my novel incredibly good has made my day. And I'm glad you like Cooper and Don - there's a lot more of them in the next update, so I hope you'll enjoy that one! <3 <3 <3
That's a very good decision you made, to still give it a sort of humor/romantic touch to the situation, while still keeping the 'end of the world' atmosphere for the characters! And yeah, a lot of VNs these days have dark narratives, which I still like to play, but... I don't want to spend an entire week mulling over characters (Like Echo, it broke my heart), heh
The part where I almost cried was... well.. around the time when Dia started to sort of... fight back against the infection? Telling herself to shut up and all. And also when the MC had no choice but to let go of her hand, and when he finally grasped what the hell happened when the initial shock wore off. I've seen many stories with mercy killings in them, but this one was one of the most hard hitting ones due to Dia doing it herself, and the MC very reluctantly accepting her decision-
And I'm glad to hear that! I do really think this novel has a lot of potential, hence my compliment! As a (online) writer myself, I can definitely understand the amount of joy you get when someone compliments your work!
You're honestly very talented, I eagerly await for the next build~!
Thank you!! Yeah, writing Dia's death and having to compose her theme was really heart-breaking for me. And what's worse is when I work in her theme in other songs - you know, when you hear a character theme tucked away in a little tune and it makes you want to cry? That sort of shit. In the next update there's a lot of it, like lost echoes of who she used to be. But, I won't keep pestering you with comments (I feel like I do that a lot) so I'll leave it here and just say thank you so much. Second update's almost done, so please let me know what you think!! <3 <3 <3
Could you, please, mark the "*-pc.zip" file as a Windows and Linux build and the second file as the Mac build, so that they could be installed via the Itch.io app
damn, i don't see many vns that aren't: GOTTA FUCK'EM ALL with different story, the best one i've seen is taigenchi, this is a really damn cool vn, the art style is cute and simplistic, the story is a good mix of dark, cute, and funny. 11/10 i love it
Ah, thank you so much!! I totally understand what you mean. While a lot of work goes into multiple routes and I applaud creators who take on the challenge, I kinda want Flatwood to be linear so everyone gets the same experience Lucas does! And plus Cooper is the best so :D
Thank you for the compliments too! I will need to update my art in the future so it's not so shitty but I suppose it's good for now. And hey, 11/10 is real high praise there!! That's amazing!! <3 <3 <3
Naww, thank you for this comment! Yeah, Don's a good boi. Lucky for you, in the next update you get to watch him cry like a fucking baby! :) <3 <3 <3 Thank you again
Thank you for your comment!! I'm so glad you like it! <3 Definitely going to be NSFW in the future! Might take a while to get there though. Also might take a while for me to have the courage to submit a pee nuss lmao
Ok this game caught my attention. The story so far is great! the plot literally grabbed my attention until the end of the current build. (which i did not expect at all btw ;c)
Lovable cast of characters, all of them having their own personality, backstories, and problems and objectives to deal with.
I love the atmosphere the setting had, and how everyone was affected by it. How everyone was doing everything they can despite their situation, to survive. well i personally wouldn't fall inlove with the one who saved me from the apocalypse (Sorry Cooper, Jason has my attention .p.) but you can definitely relate to the sadness Lucas felt for Cooper being generally avoided due to his infection. (That's Just Sad)
Great Game, Great Stuff Waiting Patiently for More!
Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! I'm glad you're happy with the story - I tried to make a hook with the beginning and shit and wasn't sure if it'd really be... interesting enough, you know? There are so many furry visual novels out there now... but I'm so happy you've chosen mine!
And also HOW COULD YOU?! Nah jk. I will admit, I've tried to make Cooper the most likeable in the novel, but... it's interesting to see that you like Jason better. I do personally love him as well. Though I have always thought of the visual novel as a linear one (I want each reader to have the exact same experience)... your comment just now is making me think of different routes. Wasn't on my mind before... but now I'm thinking about it lmao
But again, thank you!! You don't have to, but I hope you enjoy my future builds!! <3
Okay, so... That was amazing, I was feeling like shit (Nothing new here) and wanted to get away a little, so I started playing this VN. I tought I would just give up about 5 minutes in and go to sleep as usual, but I got so involved with the story, that I devoured the first chapter and fell in love with that world that was created (or the end of that world, lol). The art is lovely and the little backstory I saw about Coop, hits home like a truck.. the characters are sweet and Coop is best boi of course.. I'm already excited for the next build! sz
Btw, I love the protagonist colors, rare to find a VN where the character aren't all "normal colours".
Aww, that's so sweet!! Trust me, I feel like shit all the time as well. The whole visual novel in itself is a reflection of how I feel. But I'm glad it made you feel even a little bit better! Thank you so much for complimenting the art - I know it isn't much, and I will improve it in the future, but that just means a lot to me. And yuss, Cooper is best boi - I swear if anyone thinks different I've failed at the visual novel lmao. I will hopefully be doing monthly updates like most, but I hope to get one out sooner. I'm doing exams and shit right now so it's been fucked, but you know. Life. But keep on dancing with those teary eyes, my friend! Things don't last forever. I know this.
(And thank you! I always loved Lucas' colours. I based him off the palette of a strawberry when I first made him lol)
It seems really strange this sort of infection, that seems to consume inside out to multiply and spread, but it seems like it doesn't or least directly go after plants, seeking living beings. The artwork may not be top tier, but I'd say it is more than good enough.
Based on how it ended, to purge the infection would be to nearly bleed to death so that it pumps itself out. to fight against what is already there, they have not tried, but throwing rocks, attempting to burn it, or other long reach/indirect contact measure. Unless they can expand their habitable radius, they will surely die within a week or two.
Interesting an infection that targets the blood (red), spreading through the body like a fungal infection, then pouring itself out to lie in wait for something to latch onto.
Yes, yes! This is a very in-depth take on the Epura. I'm so happy that it's getting a lot of thought put into it such as this! You're definitely going to see more of it in the future, especially with Cooper (since he's already infected). Hopefully he doesn't cark it like Dia! Poor thing.
And yes, they will absolutely die in a few weeks if they don't find a way to move it. Though, it's covered the planet like an ocean so even if they were to find a way to remove some of it, they're still pretty much screwed lol. Thank you so much for this comment, it's made my day! <3 <3
I like happy endings, but maybe this is juts the VN to be able to portray sharing what little time is left before the inevitable, to at least go out with some semblance of happiness.
Nope, this isn't crap. It's awesome for a first build. I would like to do something like this. But I have no time to do it, much less the skill to think a story and get to write it. So, the effort is much appreciated. Thank you! Now I think I'll have nightmares now, since I read this before getting to bed. (I am not angry by the way. My fault for skipping the warning in this page :v)
Thank you so much!! <3 <3 I feel like I always need confirmation that it isn't crap. And hey, anyone can do something like this. I'm pretty crap at drawing and whatever but in time, I'll get better! You just have to want to do it - then you'll find a way if you want it enough. Hope that makes sense.
And hah, I'm glad it induced nightmares cause that's what I was going for >:)
I got interested in the story and wanted to try it, but I ended up getting sad to see that it doesn't have an Android version, hope there will be one in the future ;w;
Ah, jeez!! Sorry!! I completely forgot about that. I will have to do that for my next update!! Add it to your library if you want and I'll hopefully get it on there soon!
very interesting story so far, im excited to see more. Also really like the charater desings, the art style kinda reminds me of total drama island lol ^^
Damn... i love it not gonna lie this VN was so good. the character, the sory, the problems, all of it. and Cooper was my Favorite rn... i read it 45 minute after downloaded it and i can say it's really worth it, i hope the update is as soon as possible.
Thank you!! It's so cool hearing people say all this! And GOOD. Cooper should be your favourite lmao And yeah, I will try and update it ASAP! I am going through a rough time right now and am super busy, but updates will be more frequent soon. Thank you for reading though!! <3 <3
That's so sweet!! Thank you!! It really freakin' means a lot to me. I know I have a ways to go with the art, but that's what you get from an exhausted Digby :)
heehe I got the bruh start. I freaking LOVE your art, and musical touches. You can taste the passion that went into this, and I can't wait for more! P.S. Don is a bad boi Uwu. Why was there a question asking Cooper to show us his duck? >_< I didn't know he liked ducks.
Oh, Cooper likes ducks. He likes ducks. But thank you so freaking much! I definitely put a lot of passion into the story and its characters. I never thought people would actually like it! And heh, Don is a bad boi but a good boi at heart. He's just sick of shit and still processing the loss of his family <3 <3
And that totally makes sense. I like how you did that, losing so many people at once, it makes sense that most people would be in a shell-shocked kind of state. A sentiment shared by a few of them is that it still doesn't seem real, like they could wake up and it was all just a dream. I'm super excited to learn more about the crew (and Cooper's ducks)! Good thing no inciting incident will make them think any less of us :D ! I don't know who the shark boy is, but apparently he is a celebrity of sorts, so that will be interesting!
Aww, you're too kind! I love hearing these comments, thank you!! I thought about how people might react to it - and while I acknowledged that many people would be in a miserable and horrific state, these characters in particular have that instinct to survive. Of course, they'll break down, crash and burn later, but right now they're just kinda frozen, as you suggested! I won't tell you too much - but... I hope we're not talking about actual ducks here because that's not what I was implying lmao
Aww, y'all are gorgeous!! Thank you! I hope my worldbuilding is up to scratch, yes! And hah, I'm glad you liked the jokes! I would sit at my desk and laugh on my own telling myself I was a genius (which is untrue)
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I think the creator move on to his other project, Season May.
Heheh, I love you guys lol. Don't look at my ugly old vn HAHAHA XP
(ugly)? no, I find them nice :)
I don't know if you'll ever continue to post new updates, but I'm here to say your work is the one who inspired me to create my own VN, and I just published the DEMO, so thank you, a lot! XD
So I guess things are just belly-up at this point.
I'm starting to get concerned about if this project will continue...
Is this game still working? And Wow you have Jackaloo help lul ~ Too bad i found out this game so late, and really wanna support you after read your credit.
SCP-009 is typing...
THE LORE!
You know, as a mexican I understand very well this XD.... Well, I don't know if this water is sold in another countries too :v
Really great so far. The scene with Cooper and Lucas under the stars got me really emotional. Keep up the great work!
Really good so far. I was going to support you on patreon but it looks like its not set up yet.
God.. so long since I got to read the first build and I finally had time for the second and f#ck.. that was amazing, made me cry, obviously.. and laugh a lot too.. You just put a smile on my face through the whole build! Can't wait for the next one~
Beautifully terrific :3
I love the story, can't wait to see more updates <33 also will other survivors be romanceable or it will be just our boi Cooper? Wanna know if Jason will be a option :P
man i know i talked about this like three weeks ago but i have to say again i fucking LOVE the art style so damn much :P
spoilers!
Finally got around reading build 2 and... holy shit.
you're sense of humour is just "chef's kiss"
also wtf. did u just use incest for character building purposes? don't get me wrong i don't support incest, but i am interested to hear what the actual fuck happened to those 2 to think fricking your brother is a good thing.
also Jason x Don <3
Well what can i say? i just fell in love for this VN.
This is my favorite update even if it's the only one. I love it when they played truth or dare, when they turned fighting the Epura into a gameshow, when Cooper and Lucas cuddled under the stars, and every moment of this update. I got a bunch of laughs, parts where I empathized with the characters, and overall really enjoyed this update. I love every single bit of this update and I can't wait for more of the story. I want to see how things will end up with Cooper and Lucas and the gang. I absolutely love this VN and I can't wait for future updates. Amazing job well done!
I want to try it, could it be in the future for Android devices? 🌚🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️💙
Meme without context LOL:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
BRO I JUST DIED FOR 5 MINUTES STRAIGHT
THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT HAPPENS NO JOKE
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOU FOR THIS <3 <3 <3
The game is... equal parts dark and humorous. It's like, it's incredibly good, I loved the characters very much, especially Don and Cooper. I also like the moral dilemma the MC went through with Dia, it was... with a lack of a better word, interesting. It was incredibly sorrowful, and I did feel myself almost shedding a tear because I am too sensitive for dark shit, but I still loved it-
I would love to see how this plot would play out!
That is so sweet!! Thank you so much!! I mean, I feel like a lot of dark narratives these days can be a little... overly serious sometimes. Not all, but some. So, I've tried to balance it out - give some nice, funny, even romantic moments as well as the dark and miserable ones. Though the happy moments will definitely be declining as the story progresses - it is the end of the world. (Also which moment did you almost shed a tear?)
Thank you for the comment though!! That's so flattering - calling my novel incredibly good has made my day. And I'm glad you like Cooper and Don - there's a lot more of them in the next update, so I hope you'll enjoy that one! <3 <3 <3
That's a very good decision you made, to still give it a sort of humor/romantic touch to the situation, while still keeping the 'end of the world' atmosphere for the characters! And yeah, a lot of VNs these days have dark narratives, which I still like to play, but... I don't want to spend an entire week mulling over characters (Like Echo, it broke my heart), heh
The part where I almost cried was... well.. around the time when Dia started to sort of... fight back against the infection? Telling herself to shut up and all. And also when the MC had no choice but to let go of her hand, and when he finally grasped what the hell happened when the initial shock wore off. I've seen many stories with mercy killings in them, but this one was one of the most hard hitting ones due to Dia doing it herself, and the MC very reluctantly accepting her decision-
And I'm glad to hear that! I do really think this novel has a lot of potential, hence my compliment! As a (online) writer myself, I can definitely understand the amount of joy you get when someone compliments your work!
You're honestly very talented, I eagerly await for the next build~!
Thank you!! Yeah, writing Dia's death and having to compose her theme was really heart-breaking for me. And what's worse is when I work in her theme in other songs - you know, when you hear a character theme tucked away in a little tune and it makes you want to cry? That sort of shit. In the next update there's a lot of it, like lost echoes of who she used to be. But, I won't keep pestering you with comments (I feel like I do that a lot) so I'll leave it here and just say thank you so much. Second update's almost done, so please let me know what you think!! <3 <3 <3
Aww, it's fine! I really like how responsive you are to comments still!
And damn, guess I have to get my tissues ready for the next build, heh- I look forward to it though!
Could you, please, mark the "*-pc.zip" file as a Windows and Linux build and the second file as the Mac build, so that they could be installed via the Itch.io app
Hey!! Sorry, I'm super new to this shit - what do you mean by "mark" it? Like, rename it or something? I don't know I'm so sorry XP
(Wait I think I got it, check now)
Yep, you got it. Thanks! Great first chapter, I like the unique atmosphere and setting you portrayed
Thank you so much for even putting in the effort to download it!! I really appreciate it!! <3 <3 And thanks - I try lmao
I see gay I click, I see mental illness I click just like my life filled with mental illness HAHAHA
OMG SAME HAHAHA THAT'S LIFE :) :)
damn, i don't see many vns that aren't: GOTTA FUCK'EM ALL with different story, the best one i've seen is taigenchi, this is a really damn cool vn, the art style is cute and simplistic, the story is a good mix of dark, cute, and funny. 11/10 i love it
Ah, thank you so much!! I totally understand what you mean. While a lot of work goes into multiple routes and I applaud creators who take on the challenge, I kinda want Flatwood to be linear so everyone gets the same experience Lucas does! And plus Cooper is the best so :D
Thank you for the compliments too! I will need to update my art in the future so it's not so shitty but I suppose it's good for now. And hey, 11/10 is real high praise there!! That's amazing!! <3 <3 <3
i personally love the art, it's pretty cute
Naww, thank you <3 <3 <3
(I don't like it tho lol)
well it cute, just like the artist haha
big bruh moment
(thank you though!!)
This is a really good game, I can’t wait for the next build and play more of this.
Thank you so much!! I'm right in the midst of making it! Lots more confusion and depression to come! :)
I really liked this update, i pretty like every character even if i'm more closer to Don then everybody x)
Naww, thank you for this comment! Yeah, Don's a good boi. Lucky for you, in the next update you get to watch him cry like a fucking baby! :)
<3 <3 <3 Thank you again
its so cool i really like this)
is it going to be nswf?
Thank you for your comment!! I'm so glad you like it! <3
Definitely going to be NSFW in the future! Might take a while to get there though. Also might take a while for me to have the courage to submit a pee nuss lmao
thanks <3
Ok this game caught my attention. The story so far is great! the plot literally grabbed my attention until the end of the current build. (which i did not expect at all btw ;c)
Lovable cast of characters, all of them having their own personality, backstories, and problems and objectives to deal with.
I love the atmosphere the setting had, and how everyone was affected by it. How everyone was doing everything they can despite their situation, to survive. well i personally wouldn't fall inlove with the one who saved me from the apocalypse (Sorry Cooper, Jason has my attention .p.) but you can definitely relate to the sadness Lucas felt for Cooper being generally avoided due to his infection. (That's Just Sad)
Great Game, Great Stuff Waiting Patiently for More!
.c.
Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! I'm glad you're happy with the story - I tried to make a hook with the beginning and shit and wasn't sure if it'd really be... interesting enough, you know? There are so many furry visual novels out there now... but I'm so happy you've chosen mine!
And also HOW COULD YOU?!
Nah jk. I will admit, I've tried to make Cooper the most likeable in the novel, but... it's interesting to see that you like Jason better. I do personally love him as well. Though I have always thought of the visual novel as a linear one (I want each reader to have the exact same experience)... your comment just now is making me think of different routes. Wasn't on my mind before... but now I'm thinking about it lmao
But again, thank you!! You don't have to, but I hope you enjoy my future builds!! <3
Okay, so... That was amazing, I was feeling like shit (Nothing new here) and wanted to get away a little, so I started playing this VN. I tought I would just give up about 5 minutes in and go to sleep as usual, but I got so involved with the story, that I devoured the first chapter and fell in love with that world that was created (or the end of that world, lol). The art is lovely and the little backstory I saw about Coop, hits home like a truck.. the characters are sweet and Coop is best boi of course.. I'm already excited for the next build! sz
Btw, I love the protagonist colors, rare to find a VN where the character aren't all "normal colours".
Aww, that's so sweet!! Trust me, I feel like shit all the time as well. The whole visual novel in itself is a reflection of how I feel. But I'm glad it made you feel even a little bit better! Thank you so much for complimenting the art - I know it isn't much, and I will improve it in the future, but that just means a lot to me. And yuss, Cooper is best boi - I swear if anyone thinks different I've failed at the visual novel lmao. I will hopefully be doing monthly updates like most, but I hope to get one out sooner. I'm doing exams and shit right now so it's been fucked, but you know. Life. But keep on dancing with those teary eyes, my friend! Things don't last forever. I know this.
(And thank you! I always loved Lucas' colours. I based him off the palette of a strawberry when I first made him lol)
I'll sure keep on dancing, friend! And good luck with your exams, I was in the same boat just last week...
Keep up with the VN, it's really good and I can't wait to know more about
Cooperit all.Thank you!! And yes, more Cooper to come... :)
It seems really strange this sort of infection, that seems to consume inside out to multiply and spread, but it seems like it doesn't or least directly go after plants, seeking living beings. The artwork may not be top tier, but I'd say it is more than good enough.
Based on how it ended, to purge the infection would be to nearly bleed to death so that it pumps itself out. to fight against what is already there, they have not tried, but throwing rocks, attempting to burn it, or other long reach/indirect contact measure. Unless they can expand their habitable radius, they will surely die within a week or two.
Interesting an infection that targets the blood (red), spreading through the body like a fungal infection, then pouring itself out to lie in wait for something to latch onto.
Yes, yes! This is a very in-depth take on the Epura. I'm so happy that it's getting a lot of thought put into it such as this! You're definitely going to see more of it in the future, especially with Cooper (since he's already infected). Hopefully he doesn't cark it like Dia! Poor thing.
And yes, they will absolutely die in a few weeks if they don't find a way to move it. Though, it's covered the planet like an ocean so even if they were to find a way to remove some of it, they're still pretty much screwed lol. Thank you so much for this comment, it's made my day! <3 <3
I like happy endings, but maybe this is juts the VN to be able to portray sharing what little time is left before the inevitable, to at least go out with some semblance of happiness.
Interesting! I appreciate that! I won't spoil anything, but if you continue reading my VN, be prepared for a wild ride of emotions :)
Nope, this isn't crap. It's awesome for a first build. I would like to do something like this. But I have no time to do it, much less the skill to think a story and get to write it. So, the effort is much appreciated. Thank you! Now I think I'll have nightmares now, since I read this before getting to bed. (I am not angry by the way. My fault for skipping the warning in this page :v)
Thank you so much!! <3 <3 I feel like I always need confirmation that it isn't crap. And hey, anyone can do something like this. I'm pretty crap at drawing and whatever but in time, I'll get better! You just have to want to do it - then you'll find a way if you want it enough. Hope that makes sense.
And hah, I'm glad it induced nightmares cause that's what I was going for >:)
I got interested in the story and wanted to try it, but I ended up getting sad to see that it doesn't have an Android version, hope there will be one in the future ;w;
Ah, jeez!! Sorry!! I completely forgot about that. I will have to do that for my next update!! Add it to your library if you want and I'll hopefully get it on there soon!
Well, I used Joiplay to play this on my android phone...
very interesting story so far, im excited to see more. Also really like the charater desings, the art style kinda reminds me of total drama island lol ^^
Thank you so much!! I hope the story's as interesting as possible so far. I spent so long refining it and shiz. Love TDI <3
Damn... i love it not gonna lie this VN was so good. the character, the sory, the problems, all of it. and Cooper was my Favorite rn... i read it 45 minute after downloaded it and i can say it's really worth it, i hope the update is as soon as possible.
Thank you!! It's so cool hearing people say all this! And GOOD. Cooper should be your favourite lmao
And yeah, I will try and update it ASAP! I am going through a rough time right now and am super busy, but updates will be more frequent soon. Thank you for reading though!! <3 <3
I loved it. Cooper's super sweet too
I'm so glad you think so! Coop loves you ;3
I like what im seeing so far~
I like that you like what you're seeing!! :)
I have to admit, I am impressed with the writing, and the art is pretty good too, especially for a VN that's just beginning!
That's so sweet!! Thank you!! It really freakin' means a lot to me. I know I have a ways to go with the art, but that's what you get from an exhausted Digby :)
heehe I got the bruh start. I freaking LOVE your art, and musical touches. You can taste the passion that went into this, and I can't wait for more! P.S. Don is a bad boi Uwu. Why was there a question asking Cooper to show us his duck? >_< I didn't know he liked ducks.
Oh, Cooper likes ducks. He likes ducks.
But thank you so freaking much! I definitely put a lot of passion into the story and its characters. I never thought people would actually like it! And heh, Don is a bad boi but a good boi at heart. He's just sick of shit and still processing the loss of his family <3 <3
And that totally makes sense. I like how you did that, losing so many people at once, it makes sense that most people would be in a shell-shocked kind of state. A sentiment shared by a few of them is that it still doesn't seem real, like they could wake up and it was all just a dream. I'm super excited to learn more about the crew (and Cooper's ducks)! Good thing no inciting incident will make them think any less of us :D ! I don't know who the shark boy is, but apparently he is a celebrity of sorts, so that will be interesting!
Aww, you're too kind! I love hearing these comments, thank you!! I thought about how people might react to it - and while I acknowledged that many people would be in a miserable and horrific state, these characters in particular have that instinct to survive. Of course, they'll break down, crash and burn later, but right now they're just kinda frozen, as you suggested! I won't tell you too much - but... I hope we're not talking about actual ducks here because that's not what I was implying lmao
I think you did a really good job at world building and the little jokes you added in made my night. I cant wait to see more from you
Aww, y'all are gorgeous!! Thank you! I hope my worldbuilding is up to scratch, yes! And hah, I'm glad you liked the jokes! I would sit at my desk and laugh on my own telling myself I was a genius (which is untrue)